Of late night and ghostly whispers
I created you with carbon
Black carbon made your eyes
Black carbon made you smile.
Your hair, could have been snakes,
But I did you a favour
Dark shadows of misty black
I groomed it, just to match your eyes.
The mouth that I’ve kissed,
I created with sensual lines,
Full and happy, secrets untold
Carbon for your smile.
Those eyes, so deep I love,
I filled it by careful time and strokes
Of life, when I could have made you blunt
Yes, safe in my art.
I created you with carbon.
Black carbon made you smile
Black carbon made you stay
Black carbon made you mine.
good stuff. really like the imagery and flow of this.
Love this one..I went through your blog the other day and I got the feeling that you try too hard to express yourself..Who knows maybe it’s just me…But this one is great..Just let it flow and it will come..Like this one did
Absolutely love this one.
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love it love it love it!
i shud agree with the rest..
Heart this one *
its…ummm….inexplicably beautiful….different and touching…your words are like colours you paint on your canvas….and in the end it becomes a beautiful picture…..love your work…..
i think m too late to comment.. bt stillits such a beautiful one:D
fantastic. a tribute to art & poetry rolled into one. you are really gifted.
Hi,
Somehow missed this one.Its superb. My little baby is certainly ver—-y talented.Good luck and God Bless.